The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
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The two pie charts above give information about the increases and decreases in the percentage of the production of different kinds of
energy
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between 1995 and 2005 years in France.
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, the manufacture of all types of
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had increased except the production of petrol. In both charts, gas was the largest segment in producing
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,
while
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other types of
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than coal, gas, petrol and nuclear power keep being the least produced
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. At the beginning of the 10-year period, the production of coal was equal to 29.80% and
at the end
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increased to 1%. The rate of gas had rose to 30.31% from 29.63% during the same period of time as coal. The percentage of nuclear and other types of
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grew from 6.40% and 4.90%, respectively, to 10.10% and 9.10% between 1995 and 2005 years.
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, only the rate of the petro had dropped 10.10% from 29.27% during a decade.
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