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The chart bellow shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and proportion of men and women who held them in 1999

The chart bellow shows the different level of post-school qualifications in Australia and proportion of men and women who held them in 1999
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The graph illustrates the various levels of post-school qualifications among Australian individuals and the ratio of
males
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 and females who held them in 1999.
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, it can be clearly seen that rates of skilled vocational diplomas were the highest among Australian
males
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 (over 90%),
whereas
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 rates were minuscule among
women
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 (slightly 10%).
According to
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 the bar chart, it is interesting to note that men (nearly 70%)
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 lead
women
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 (only 30%) from getting a postgraduate diploma.
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, 60%
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males
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 in Australia got a master’s
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,
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 only 40%
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women
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of women
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 got an identical
degree
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 in 1999.
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, the level of
males
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 (nearly 40%) who got undergraduate diplomas was 30% lower in comparison with
women
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 (more than 70%). Despite that proportion, the percentage of people who got a bachelor’s
degree
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, regardless of genes, was slightly equal. To give details, nearly 50% of men acquired a bachelor’s
degree
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 whilst nearly 60% of
women
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 got the same
degree
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 in 1999.
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