Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I enjoyed travelling with your airlines

last

Saturday from London to Toronto.

However

, To my bad fortune, I left my back bag in the overhead compartment above my seat number 32A. I was not paying attention that day because I wanted to go to the hotel quickly. sadly it was not until I arrived at my room that I realised that I have forgotten my bag on the plane. The bag is black in colour with yellow zippers. It

also

has the manufacturer's logo on the front. The handle is made of brown leather. As for its contents, there is a 17-inch grey laptop in the main compartment and a water bottle in the side pocket.

In addition

to some clothes that I have placed in the laptop's space. I trust your well-known reputation to send my item to where I live. The delivery fees will be paid by me. I live in Holiday Inn,Toronto room 505. I am looking forward to hearing from you and resolving my issue. Yours Faithfully, Sam Hatmaker

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7 paragraphs

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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