Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I enjoyed travelling with your airlines

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Saturday from London to Toronto.

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, To my bad fortune, I left my back bag in the overhead compartment above my seat number 32A. I was not paying attention that day because I wanted to go to the hotel quickly. sadly it was not until I arrived at my room that I realised that I have forgotten my bag on the plane. The bag is black in colour with yellow zippers. It

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has the manufacturer's logo on the front. The handle is made of brown leather. As for its contents, there is a 17-inch grey laptop in the main compartment and a water bottle in the side pocket.

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to some clothes that I have placed in the laptop's space. I trust your well-known reputation to send my item to where I live. The delivery fees will be paid by me. I live in Holiday Inn,Toronto room 505. I am looking forward to hearing from you and resolving my issue. Yours Faithfully, Sam Hatmaker

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

176 words

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Unfortunate incident
Flight details
Distraction
Valuable possessions
Sentimental value
Lost and found procedure
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