The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making a violin by hand. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The below-given
pitcures
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pictures
show the process of creating a hand-made
violin
. As we glance at the diagrams, it is noticeable that the process of
violin
making is of nine different steps.
To begin
with, the shape of the
violin
is outlined on a thin piece of wood and is cut into two parts, front and back , with the help of a saw. Through the use of a cutting tool,
a
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f-hole is formed in the front body of the
violin
. The process continues with the making of
bass
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the bass
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bar with the help of glue. A heating tool is used to form shaped ribs which are later
on
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placed between the front part and the back part of the
violin
.
Thus
, the body of the
violin
is ready and the neck
along with
the scroll
are
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constructed. The neck is later assembled on top of the body and is entirely varnished and other additional parts are assembled, and
thus
a complete
violin
is formed.
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