The two pie charts below the show persentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
Essay type:
Pie
chart 📉
The two pie
charts 📈 illustrate 8 categories of Turkey
's means (agriculture, Transportation, Healthcare and education, Finance, Business and others , Leisure and Hospitality, and government) over the period of 16 years
It is noticeable that the proportion of using agriculture and Leisure and Hospitality experienced a considerable lower between 2000 and 2016, while
the figure for construction and Trade, Utilities and Transportation power saw an arm.
In 2000,24% of the average, Turkey
's economy went into agriculture which was the largest pie
graph. But, by 2016 this
figure had fallen by one in ten.
During the given period, the demand for Leisure and Hospitality in Turkey
experienced a 3 per cent decrease from 17% to 14%.
By contrast
, in terms of Trade, Utilitea and Transportation the proportion of help in this
category made up 14% in 2000, after sixteen years this
figure saw an increase at 16 per cent making larger sectors on the sketch 📈.
In Turkey
country, the smallest proportion belonged to construction in the first 🥇 year, however
, in 2016, there was a 7% rise from 3% to 10% in this
category by overtaking finance, business and other government sectors.
The only unchanged sector in the given pie
chart 📉 is Healthcare and Education which maintained its rate over the period accounting 🧾 for 17%.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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