The charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
The chart illustrates the data of
students
(graduates
& postgraduates) in the UK who decided not to go for a full-time job in the year 2008. The information are collected on 5 parameters( part-time, voluntary, further
study, and unemployment)
Overall
, the majority of students
chose to continue their education, while
the least number of graduates
chose to engage in volunteer work. Additionally
, students
who took up part-time jobs reported that they were satisfied, moving this
criterion to the second highest. Plus, a large number of UK graduates
are underemployed contrasted with postgraduates.
In 2008, 2,725 post-graduates
and 29,665 graduates
decided to study further
whereas
, only 345 and 3,500 chose voluntary work respectively. In terms of part-time work,there is a significant difference of 15,200 students
when comparing graduates
and post-graduates
.
In addition
, only 1,625 postgraduates are without employment, compared to 16,235 graduates
making the UK's graduates
the group of people with the highest unemployment rate in 2008Submitted by Leena Kapoor on
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