The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
The line graph illustrates the number of
books
in four different libraries during 2014, and the pie chart shows five types of books
that were borrowed during the same period from June to September including Self-help, Fiction, History, Science and Biography.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of borrowed books
increased from June to September in all the village libraries, except two libraries dropped by Ryeslip from 300 to 170 books
in four months and Sutton Wood from 250 to 90 books
during August.
In terms of the highest borrowed ,books
Fiction stands at the top of other types of books
at 43% followed by Biography at 19%, whereas
History and Science were similar standings at 14%, and the lowest percentage was Self-help at 10%.
in summary, the number of borrowed books
increased during summer time,
were people had enough time and long weekends to read more Remove the comma
apply
books
on different subjects.Submitted by yassinm1211 on
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