The bar chart illustrates the percentage of businesses in the UK who had a social media presence.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of businesses in the UK who had a social media presence.
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The bar chart depicts the social media presence of small, medium, and large businesses in the UK between 2012 and 2016.
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, it is apparent that figures for every kind of business increased regardless of a common throughout and a significant pullback in 2015. Large trade increased the least yet had a lot more, the biggest presence each year.
To begin
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with small businesses, about 30% (the lowest data point on the chart) had a social media presence in 2012 and 2013.
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number
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rose to 35% by 2014,
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fell to 30%, and the final rise
at the end
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of the study period was less than 50%. The trend for medium-sized trade was similar, starting at 31%, rising significantly to about 50% in 2013 and 2014, dropping to 30% again in 2015, and growing to 52% in 2016.
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, The proportions for large businesses were more than double for small and medium enterprises at to beginning of the period (78%).
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figure stagnated until 2015, when it fell to its lowest point of 51%, preceding a final recovery(coming back to its previous number) to 79% in 2016.
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