The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The given bar chart compares the
percentage
of two genders in Australia: men and
women
in various age groups who did
exercise
regularly in 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the number of
women
doing
exercise
saw an upward trend through the older.
However
, the opposite will be true for the man. First of all, the
percentage
of
women
from 45 to 54 doing
exercise
reach the highest peak which is about 53%. Follow by is the group of
people
from 55 to 64 years old which is just lower than the first 0.3%.
Although
,
women
in the age group of 35 to 44 had the lowest
percentage
of
people
who did physical activity. For the man, the group of age from 15 to 24 had the highest
percentage
of
people
doing
exercise
which is 52.8%. Opposite with the
women
, from 35 to 44, the men had the lowest
percentage
of
people
who did work out which is lower than 14%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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