The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.
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The two-line graph illustrates information about how New Zealand Import figures from Australia and Japan changed during the years 1994-2004. It is clear from the graphs that the
imports
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from Australia and Japan Fluctuated dramatically, with different results
at the end
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. To be more specific, Australian
imports
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shrank during the
year
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1998 and were at their lowest point in 1999 but the figures quickly managed to skyrocket in the years 2000 to 2001 to the 7500
million
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NZ
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$ and showed little consistency and went down again but
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time they value of
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went at an all-time high around 8000
million
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NZ
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$.
On the other hand
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, Japan's
imports
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were 3000
million
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NZ
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$ in the
year
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1994 and were very consistent and tripled in the
year
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1996 at 6000
NZ
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million
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dollars but its downfall started in the following
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when its
imports
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kept dropping quickly and the values started decreasing consistently and in the final
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2004 they hit an all-time low 2000
million
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NZ
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$.
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