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Worldwide water consumption. Water consumption by regions Brazil an Congo in 2000.

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The following line graph illustrates worldwide
water
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 consumption in three great sectors
such
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 as agriculture, industrial and domestic
use
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.
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 the table compares the
use
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 of
water
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 in two countries,
Brazil
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 and the Democratic Republic of Congo during the year 2000.
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, it is noticeable that consuming
water
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 saw a rise in all three sectors between 1900 and 2000.
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, the population of
Brazil
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 utilized much more
water
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 as compared to DRC. To be more specific, the amount of
water
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 used for agriculture had an enormous climb from about 500km in 1900 to its peak of 3000km in 2000.
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, industrial and domestic
use
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 were raising gradually till the year of 1940. Afterwards, both sectors saw a marked rise between 1950 and 2000 reaching 1500km in industrial
use
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 and nearly 500
km
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 in domestic consumption. Coming to the table, in 2000 the population of
Brazil
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 and Congo were 176 million and 5.2 million respectively.
Water
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 consumption per person in
Brazil
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, at 359m, was much higher than that in Congo, at only 8m, and
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 could be clarified by the fact that
Brazil
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 had 265 times more irrigated land.
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