The line graph gives the percentage of tourist`s visits for England art galleries,pavilions,piers and festivals in Brighton.
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The line graph depicts the information regarding the
percentage
of tourist
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tourists
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four different attractions in Brighton.The data is calibrated in Remove the preposition
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percentage
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Pavilion in 1995. Remove the preposition
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Art
Galleries
in 2010.
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Pavilion in 1995 which was 50% Remove the preposition
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whereas
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Art
Galleries
in 2010 which was near
about 10%.In 1990, the Change the word
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Art
Galleries
show a decline in the number of persons
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percentage
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Festivals
Pier
percentile was slowly elevated which was roughly 10%.In 2005,the Correct article usage
the Pier
percentage
of Pier rose rapidly to 20% in 2010.Interestingy
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Art
Galleries
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