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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

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In recent days, many individuals use apps and smartphones to transfer cash to friends, families and businesses. From my point of view,
this
 is
major
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 positive development for society.
However
, there is a greater potential
of
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fraud
, especially who do not know too much about the
internet
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. On the one hand, transferring
money
 online brings several advantages to society. In the past, people had to make trips to the bank and wait in line and fill out
lot
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 of the forms. Now, citizens can
transferring
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transfer
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 bills through apps that can send
it
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 immediately. The time saved is an important factor for individuals and businesses. On
other
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 hand, It is point that transferring
money
 has
potential
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 of
fraud
.
For example
, when
transfer
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money
 online, There is
chance
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a chance
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 to password
exposed
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 to the hacker, who will exchange the password and take
money
.
In addition
to
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, youth people can deal with
this
 complication, but old citizens are not mindful of
potential
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the potential
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 of
fraud
.
Consequently
, every year thousands of retired citizens become victims of
fraud
money
 through the
internet
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Internet
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. In conclusion, transferring
money
 over the
internet
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 bring several benefits
for
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to
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 society, none the less person must be careful and mindful
for
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of
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 potential
fraud
.
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