The graph below gives information about the number of Jobs in four sectors of the economy in the US between 1960 and 2020.
The line chart illustrates how many
jobs
there were in four areas of the US economy from 1960 to 2020. Use synonyms
It is clear that
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while
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number
of Use synonyms
jobs
in manufacturing and agriculture domains declined,Use synonyms
of
those in the retail and Change preposition
apply
healthcare
sectors showed the reverse. Looking Use synonyms
firstly
at increases, about 6 Linking Words
million
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jobs
were provided in the retail industry in 1960. Use synonyms
This
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number
rose steadily over the next four decades and reached 15m, before Use synonyms
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rising negligibly by a Linking Words
million
in the final year. Use synonyms
Similarly
, a noticeable growth was noted in the Linking Words
healthcare
sector. Increasing markedly from roughly 2m to approximately 16m over the timeframe, the Use synonyms
healthcare
area provided the same Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
jobs
as the retail sector by 2020. In stark contrast, the other two domains of the US economy witnessed a drop in the Use synonyms
number
of positions. Use synonyms
For example
, despite the initial climb from 15 Linking Words
million
to a table-high of 20 Use synonyms
million
during the first 2 decades, the figure for the manufacturing industry declined sharply to 13Use synonyms
m
over the period, giving dominance to retail and Correct your spelling
million
healthcare
in the Use synonyms
last
year. Linking Words
This
was true for the agriculture sector too, whose employment positions dropped appreciably from around 6m to about 3.5m between 1960 and 1980, plateaued at Linking Words
this
level over the next 2 decades and Linking Words
then
decreased marginally to about 2m in the Linking Words
last
year.Linking Words
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