The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.
The line graph depicts the relationship between
age
and the misconduct committed last
period and the pie chart illustrates the proportion of various crime
did by the population. It is clear that
people who were between the age
group 12 to 28 committed most of the crime
and violent crime
was by far the most popular violation.
In the past year, we can see that teenagers start doing illegal things from the age
of 8 which later has a huge increase in crime
as they get old. Teenagers who were 12 years old committed 5 thousand crimes
in the past year and as they got older the number of crimes
shot up very quickly. People who were between the age
of 16-20 did 80 thousand crimes
last
year. After
this
when their age
reaches around ,28 the number of crimes
starts decreasing as they get mature and remains constant.
Moving on to the types of crime
committed, violent crime
was doing the most, at 46%. The next most committed crime
was property crime
, accounting for 23% and drug crime
being similar around 22%. The least committed crime
was public order crime
which accumulated 9%.Submitted by yashrrajput46 on
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