Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

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Some people assert that at present time students are not really interested in science to study in
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many others do not pay a lot of attention to
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, how the technological progress can grow
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specialist
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suitable education?
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the major
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is uncomfortable and
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inconvenient
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salaries for scientists.
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. But they do not completely understand, that absence of certain experts will have an
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on their own life. New technology will grow considerably
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, for which we can find plenty of evidence from our own experience. I believe, that exactly
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, I would like to say that it is highly important to maintain interest in science among
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generation.
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prospects of the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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