The given bar chart illustrates unemployment rates among women in each country of the UK in 2013 and 2014.
Overall
, England, Wales and Northern Ireland dropped Linking Words
while
only Scotland rose. Linking Words
In addition
, Northern Ireland became the least country with unemployed women.
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To begin
with, England had the highest unemployment rate in 2013 with 6,8%. Linking Words
By contrast
, Wales had only 5.4% of jobless females, being the lowest that year.
England dropped by 0.3% and Wales by 0.4% with final results of 6.5% and 5.0% Linking Words
respectfully
. In comparison with them, Northern Ireland had an exponential downfall by 1% becoming the country with Replace the word
respectively
least
percentage of jobless women. Correct word choice
the lowest
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contrary
, Scotland's rate increasedCorrect article usage
the contrary
,
and was 6.7% almost like in Remove the comma
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Sngland
in 2013.Correct your spelling
England