The bar graphs illustrate the proportion of who watched reality and game shows in men and women and 16-24, 25-34, 35-44 and 45+ age groups in Australia.
The bar graphs illustrate the proportion of who watched
reality
and game shows in men and women and 16-24, 25-34, 35-44 and 45+ age
groups
in Australia.
We can see from the data that most Australian people watched more reality
shows than game shows, as a result
the
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reality
shows are more popular. Reality
shows watched
by about 70 % of women Add a missing verb
are watched
groups
, which is almost double as many as men.
If we compare by age
groups
, the percentage of human beings watching reality
shows increases steadily from ages 16 to 45 with the lowest percentage of viewers, at just over 50% of the group 16-24 and the greatest percentage, at 68% of the over 45.
The game shows are popular among the age
group over 45 years (70%) whereas
the smallest pattern is demonstrated by 25
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the 25
age
group (38%). As well as
those are popular among both the male and female groups
, at 60%.Submitted by dnm.best on
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