You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what was good about the food and the services

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Dear Manager, I am writing

this

letter to you, to express my gratitude and satisfaction towards the staff and management of The Oberoi Hotel located at Hallway Street, Mumbai. I visited your hotel on the 4th of June 2023 accompanied by my five friends, to celebrate my birthday. As

this

was my 25th birthday, I had planned to host a party for my close friends.I would like to extend my appreciation for the luscious meal and the great service that we received.We opted for a non-vegetarian course followed by some dessert

at the end

. I and my friends enjoyed the

food

and were soon in a

food

coma.

To conclude

the dinner, we even had desserts which the chef had curated using exotic fruits. We were extremely happy with the

food

as well as

the services we received during the dinner.I would like to thank Mr Binoi who was responsible for the arrangements and serving

food

during the celebrations. Thank You, Your’s faithful, Joy

Submitted by yusra.f.jaffer on Wed Jul 05 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

164 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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