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You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter Give details of your visit to the restaurant Explain the reason for the celebration Say what was good about the food and the services

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Dear Manager, I am writing
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 letter to you, to express my gratitude and satisfaction towards the staff and management of The Oberoi Hotel located at Hallway Street, Mumbai. I visited your hotel on the 4th of June 2023 accompanied by my five friends, to celebrate my birthday. As
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 was my 25th birthday, I had planned to host a party for my close friends.I would like to extend my appreciation for the luscious meal and the great service that we received.We opted for a non-vegetarian course followed by some dessert
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. I and my friends enjoyed the
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 and were soon in a
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 coma.
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 the dinner, we even had desserts which the chef had curated using exotic fruits. We were extremely happy with the
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 the services we received during the dinner.I would like to thank Mr Binoi who was responsible for the arrangements and serving
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 during the celebrations. Thank You, Your’s faithful, Joy
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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