The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph displays the amount of oil in millions of barrels per day and the consumers in China between 1982 and 2006.
Overall
, consuming oil experieced
an upward trend Correct your spelling
experienced
while
the extraction from the soil had a lightlly
Correct your spelling
lightly
slightly
increasy
in twenty-four years.
Starting from 1982, getting oil was nearly as 2 million Correct your spelling
increase
of
barrels as the Change preposition
apply
numer
of shoppers. Correct your spelling
number
However
, in 2006, the difference between buiers
was not nearly as high as sellers with a total of 6 Correct your spelling
buyers
millions
barrels against 3,5 Change to singular
million
producted
. Correct your spelling
products
In addition
, 1990 to 1994 had a notably
peak in growth because of the rapid ascent in that period.
Change the adverb
notable
In contrast
, to produce the highest volum
Correct your spelling
volume
increased
was in 1986, after that producing petroleum had a steady increase of half Wrong verb form
increase
Correct article usage
a millions
millions
. Notably, there Fix the agreement mistake
million
were
a huge discrepancy between both Change the verb form
was
process
.Change to a plural noun
processes
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