The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph displays the amount of oil in millions of barrels per day and the consumers in China between 1982 and 2006.

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, consuming oil

experieced

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experienced

an upward trend

while

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the extraction from the soil had a

lightlly

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lightly

slightly

increasy

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increase

in twenty-four years. Starting from 1982, getting oil was nearly as 2 million

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barrels as the

numer

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number

of shoppers.

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, in 2006, the difference between

buiers

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buyers

was not nearly as high as sellers with a total of 6

millions

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barrels against 3,5

producted

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products

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, 1990 to 1994 had a

notably

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peak in growth because of the rapid ascent in that period.

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, to produce the highest

volum

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volume

increased

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was in 1986, after that producing petroleum had a steady increase of half

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a millions

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millions

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million

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. Notably, there

were

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a huge discrepancy between both

process

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

134 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

oil production
oil consumption
gradual increase
surpass
overtake
reliance on imports
disparity
steady rise
growing gap
significant

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The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is better to build new museums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people aroung the world use social media every day to keep in touch with others people and get new events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Some People think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?