the table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. summarize the information, and make aconparison . write at least 150 words

the table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. summarize the information, and make aconparison . write at least 150 words
The display table illustrates the proportion of monthly household
income
five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. The highest
income
on food and drink is
spend
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by Turkey
36
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%, and the lowest is spent by
the
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Germany at 22%, and France, UK and Spain respectively
25
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%,27% and 31%. In Housing, Clothing and Entertainment,
a
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France uses respectively 31%,7%, and 13%. German people's
income
is used 33% on house, 15% on clothes and 19% on fun
activity
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. UK spend 11%
for
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clothing and entertainment, and more on house. Turkey uses 20% on household and half on the fun part, and 12% on
cloths
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clothes
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. Spain people use
there
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18%
income
on
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household, 8% on clothes and 15% on activity. People use 30% of their
income
on the house. Around 15% of
income
is used for the fun part. In
above
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,table it is clearly given that 1/4 of
income
is used for eating and less on clothing.
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