The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map display abot the
town
of Canterbury, a new school
for the area. The map shows two possible sites for school
. The town
has university and school
facilities.
The town
of Canterbury is covered with green areas like the countryside
. In the west, east, north and south side house are there. On the north ,side there is a university. In the middle of the ,
Remove the comma
apply
town
there is the town
centre with is also
known as a free traffic zone. There are main roads in town
.
There are two schools in Canterbury one in the countryside
and another in the middle of town
. There is 7 km to Chartham from between of town
, which has 4500 population and Sturry is 5km away and the population is more than Chartham it's 7000.
The nearest place is Chartham which is a little distance from the countryside
. Sturry is near, school
and the countryside
. More areas are covered with housing.Submitted by purvametaliya99 on
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