The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map display abot the
town
of Canterbury, a new Use synonyms
school
for the area. The map shows two possible sites for Use synonyms
school
. The Use synonyms
town
has university and Use synonyms
school
facilities.
The Use synonyms
town
of Canterbury is covered with green areas like the Use synonyms
countryside
. In the west, east, north and south side house are there. On the north ,side there is a university. In the middle of the Use synonyms
,
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town
there is the Use synonyms
town
centre with is Use synonyms
also
known as a free traffic zone. There are main roads in Linking Words
town
.
There are two schools in Canterbury one in the Use synonyms
countryside
and another in the middle of Use synonyms
town
. There is 7 km to Chartham from between of Use synonyms
town
, which has 4500 population and Sturry is 5km away and the population is more than Chartham it's 7000.
The nearest place is Chartham which is a little distance from the Use synonyms
countryside
. Sturry is near, Use synonyms
school
and the Use synonyms
countryside
. More areas are covered with housing.Use synonyms
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