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the pie charts show the amount of electircity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables of energy in the year 2009.

the pie charts show the amount of electircity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables of energy in the year 2009.
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The four pie charts display all sources of electricity production including sustainable ones in two European countries,
Germany
 and
France
 in 2009. The unit to measure the electricity is kWh.
Overall
, it can be seen that the whole electricity produced in
Germany
 was higher than that of
France
. It
also
 shows
while
 the main source of
energy
 production in
Germany
 was conventional
themal
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thermal
, in
France
, it was replaced by nuclear
energy
.
Additionally
, the key element of renewable resources for
Germany
 was biomass and wind power,
whereas
 for
France
 it changed to hydroelectric power. In
Germany
, biomass accounted for the main source of
energy
, at almost 60%.
This
 number was far higher than that for
France
, dropping to one in ten (10.3%). A large amount of
energy
 in
France
, more than two-thirds of all resources,
stemed
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stem
 from nuclear
energy
,
while
this
 number for
Germany
 was around one-quarter. Both
Germany
 and
France
 used a quite similar percentage of renewable sources, ranging around 17 to 13 respectively. Moving to sustainable resources, in
France
, hydroelectric accounted nearly for all renewable energies, at 80.5%.
In contrast
 to
France
, in
Germany
, more than
two-third
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 of renewable
engeries
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energies
 contributed to two elements of biomass and wind, at 39.3% and 36.9% respectively. The role of
the
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these two sectors in
France
 was around 18% combined. Solar
energy
 comprised 6.1% in
Germany
, but
this
 number was less than 1% in
France
. Geothermal was not used in both countries.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, france, energy with synonyms.
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