Some employers of er their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staf healthier and thus more ef ective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.

Many

employers

usualy

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usually

fund membership of

sport

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clubs for their workforce to reach benefits on their business,

however

, some

of

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employers

and

entrapreneurs

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entrepreneurs

believe that

this

measure is not beneficial. The former method is reasonable and it could decrease the demerits in workplaces

such

as factories and would bring positive impacts in companies. Many

entrapreneurs

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entrepreneurs

and

employers

consider a significant budget for

sport

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activities for their workforces. They believe that

this

action is absolutely important because it

berings

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brings

physical health for their employees,

as a result

, they will be able to work effectively and more

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in their

profassions

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professions

profession

.

This

situation has advantages for both the owners of workplaces and employees.

On the other hand

, the

denires

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deniers

desires

think that

instead

of spending money on gyms and

sport

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clubs, it is better to fund courses which are related to

workforce's

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tasks. They

also

believe that these

inecitives

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initiatives

should be better

to

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put on other services

such

as health

ensurace

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insurance

or medical services.

This

is not to say that the owners of occupations must not consider

sport

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activities and

excercise

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exercise

for their workers and employees. They have a

reasponsibility

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responsibility

about

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profassions

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professions

professionals

in their companies. Spending a budget on

sport

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sports

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activities helps the

entrapreneurs

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entrepreneurs

for rising their income.

Moreover

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people who work in work

palces

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places

acheive

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achieve

their physical health. In conclusion, I agree

employers

must consider a

siginficant

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significant

amount of money for workers in their companies and it has a great deal of pros for each of these two groups.