THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.

THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
The bar graph illustrates the numbers of male and female
students
learning computer science in a UK university from the
year
2010 to 2012.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number of females for both oversea and British
students
was growing smoothly as compared to men, where considerable fluctuations have been noticed in the given period. In the
year
2010, the proportion of male UK learners was almost double the number of international
students
at 40 thousand. In 2011 a small difference has been observed,
whereas
almost 5 home
students
increased as compared to the foreign attendant in the
year
2012, noticed as 44 and 39 respectively. Over the same period, a continuous rise has been seen from 2010 to 2012. In the
year
32 thousand females who attended the computer science course were from their home country, which was almost twice as the internationals.
Furthermore
, a big jump has been shown in 2011 for local
students
peaking at 44 thousand, which remained stable only with 1 additional student in 2012.
On the contrary
, foreign learners increased only by 3
students
from the
year
2011 to 2012.
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