The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the ratio of international colleger among the total university
graduates
in several Canadian regions between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
, all the provinces increased the share of international
graduates
, except Alberta. Outstanding is the growth of British Columbia which doubled the figure over the years. Looking into details, regions which hospited most foreign students were NewBrunswickk, Nova Scotia, and Quebec in 2001(all of them around 6-7%). The ranking of the three didn't change over the years, in fact, the figures became approximately 12%, 10%, and 8% respectively.
Moreover
, regions
such
as Manitoba, Newfoundland-Labrador, and Ontario exhibited a significant rise. Each of them grew from about 3-4% to 6-7%. Foreign
graduates
of British Columbia experienced a substantial climb. The percentage went up from less than 5% to more than 10%, surpassing local areas
such
as Quebec and Alberta.
On the other hand
, Alberta showed a decline (from 5% to 4%) and resulted to be the region that nurtured the least percentage of international
graduates
in 2006.
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