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Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favour.

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Abuse of tobacco products is an
age old
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 activity and is gaining more prevalence in
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society every passing decade. Few countries have taken
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 against smoking in public areas like
work places
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workplaces
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 and eateries and
others
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 nations think
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. We will be discussing both sides in
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 essay and conclude it with my opinion. On one hand, The proponents of the law state that not only smoking has severe ill
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 on the person’s own
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 , but
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 compromises the
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 of the people nearby,
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 the child population.
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 means passive smoking might cause major
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 hazards.
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, they
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 point out that it can influence
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youngsters and make them addicted to
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 substances thereby making them vulnerable to severe
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 issues in the future.
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, the opponents of
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 rule cite that every human has
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 to act as they like and By
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 they imply that
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smokers are addicted and may have a sudden urge to smoke. It could be
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 task to find a place to smoke when in a meeting or a public gathering.
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 perhaps could lead to
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 amount of public interaction and may make them isolated from
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 of the pupils.
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 that everyone has a right to
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 and freedom to act as they like, but
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 can not exclude the fact that people need to be morally more responsible and not cause harm to others , especially in terms of
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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