You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts display information about how working adults
spend
their Wrong verb form
spent
time
in a particular area in 1958 and 2008.
Use synonyms
It is clear that
there was a considerable increase in the percentage of Linking Words
time
employed Use synonyms
in
working or travelling to the workplace, with a Change preposition
apply
subseuquent
reduction Correct your spelling
subsequent
of
leisure Change preposition
in
time
with family or friends, and a decline Use synonyms
of
the sleeping period.
In 1958 working adults invested a third of their Change preposition
in
time
in their profession, roughly a third in their sleeping, and almost Use synonyms
one fifth
going out with their relatives. They used only an Add a hyphen
one-fifth
unsignificant
proportion of their daytime travelling to reach their workplaceCorrect your spelling
insignificant
,
and employed the rest of the day between sport and relaxing at home.
Remove the comma
apply
On the other hand
, in 2008 there was a steep rise in the percentage of Linking Words
time
dedicated to the working area, jumping up to 50% if both working and commuting hours are merged.
The proportion of moments dedicated to sleep sank by Use synonyms
one third
to Add a hyphen
one-third
one fourth
throughout the years. Leisure Add a hyphen
one-fourth
time
suffered a dramatic decrease from 19% to 6%, Use synonyms
wherease
chilling at home almost doubled. The amount of Correct your spelling
whereas
time
dedicated to Use synonyms
sport
saw a marginal growth from 6 to 8%.Fix the agreement mistake
sports
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
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