The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts display information about how working adults

spend

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their

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in a particular area in 1958 and 2008.

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there was a considerable increase in the percentage of

time

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employed

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working or travelling to the workplace, with a

subseuquent

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subsequent

reduction

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in

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leisure

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with family or friends, and a decline

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in

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the sleeping period. In 1958 working adults invested a third of their

time

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in their profession, roughly a third in their sleeping, and almost

one fifth

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one-fifth

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going out with their relatives. They used only an

unsignificant

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insignificant

proportion of their daytime travelling to reach their workplace

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and employed the rest of the day between sport and relaxing at home.

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, in 2008 there was a steep rise in the percentage of

time

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dedicated to the working area, jumping up to 50% if both working and commuting hours are merged. The proportion of moments dedicated to sleep sank by

one third

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to

one fourth

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throughout the years. Leisure

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suffered a dramatic decrease from 19% to 6%,

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whereas

chilling at home almost doubled. The amount of

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dedicated to

sport

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sports

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saw a marginal growth from 6 to 8%.