THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of male and female attendees of
computer
science
classes who are studying at home in Britain and studying internationally during the period of 2010 and 2012.
Overall
, it can be noticed that female students
number
who attends computer
science
class was gradually increasing, while
male students
number
had fluctuations over the whole time
The number
of British male students
quantity was 39 thousand
in 2010, while
oversee students
number
was half less than it. 2011 experienced a sharp decrease in the number
of home studying attendees for 15 thousand
, whereas
international students
even had a slight decrease. In 2012 both abroad and British students
had increased by approximately 20thousand people
The number
of women who study computer
science
at home was 32 thousand
in 2010 followed by an increase of 13 thousand
people in 2012. The number
of overseas students
number
increased slightly to 6 000 students
from 2010 to 2012. We can see that international females number
learning computer
science
3 times lower than BritishSubmitted by telagisova.07 on
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