THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.

THE BAR CHART BELOW GIVES INFOMATION ABOOUT THE NUMBER OF STUDENTS STUDYING COMPUTER SCIENCE AT A uk university between 2010 and 2012. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of male and female attendees of
computer
science
classes who are studying at home in Britain and studying internationally during the period of 2010 and 2012.
Overall
, it can be noticed that female
students
number
who attends
computer
science
class was gradually increasing,
while
male
students
number
had fluctuations over the whole time The
number
of British male
students
quantity was 39
thousand
in 2010,
while
oversee
students
number
was half less than it. 2011 experienced a sharp decrease in the
number
of home studying attendees for 15
thousand
,
whereas
international
students
even had a slight decrease. In 2012 both abroad and British
students
had increased by approximately 20thousand people The
number
of women who study
computer
science
at home was 32
thousand
in 2010 followed by an increase of 13
thousand
people in 2012. The
number
of overseas
students
number
increased slightly to 6 000
students
from 2010 to 2012. We can see that international females
number
learning
computer
science
3 times lower than British
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