The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular activity in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the percentages of Australian males and females in different
age
groups doing everyday activities in 2010.
Overall
, the youngest male group is the most active in their gender and the females aged 45 to 54 were found to be the most in their gender.
In 2010, almost half of Australian men
(53%) and women (48%) aged 15 to 24 pitched in regular physical activities. While
the participation of men
dropped noticeably to 42.2% between ages 25 to 34, the same female age
group remained roughly constant. With 39.5% of men
aged 35 to 44 participated in exercises regularly, whereas
the women in this
age
were far more active than men
reaching 52.5%.
In the end, the last
three age
groups of both genders were more active than teens.Submitted by wind1y998 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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