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You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were hpleased with the food and services. a letter to the restaurant manager. I n your letter •Give details of your visit to the restaurant •Explain the reason for the celebration N

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To,
Mr.
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 Eric, Restaurant manager. Sir, Hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am writing
this
 letter to you to thank you and your great team for
efforts
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the efforts
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 they are putting in, to make
this
 place worthy to visit often . I,
along with
 my friends visited your place
last
 Wednesday to celebrate our final result together and to celebrate one of my friend's birthday. Another friend of mine who reserved our table and asked for some decorations and cake had all good words for your coordination team. They were prompt to reply and helpful in all ways.
Firstly
, the decorations were complimentary for
birthday
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 and it is a lovely gesture by you.
Secondly
, the food we ordered , especially Moroccan chicken and chilly beef
were
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 exotically delicious and juicy. Everything was served hot and that too in enough quantity. Shakes and drinks, on
other
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 hand, were suggested by your waiters and were praiseworthy. All the staff was not only attentive but
also
 keen to serve us better. I must say, it was one marvellous lunch together after a long and you deserve appreciation for making it memorable. I am looking forward to
visit
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 again with my family. Thanking you
Mr.
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