The diagram shows the different stages of brick production for the construction industry. In general, brick production includes 7 steps, starting with excavation and ending with delivery.

The diagram shows the different stages of brick production for the construction industry. In general, brick production includes 7 steps, starting with excavation and ending with delivery.
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The diagram shows the different stages of brick production
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the construction industry. In general, brick production includes 7 steps, starting with excavation and ending with delivery. First of all brick manufacturing is digging the clay with a digger.
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clay is
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filtered and processed in a roller machine and
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mixed with sand and water. In the third stage, the mixture is either kept in a mould or cut with a wire cutter to make the
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. In the next step, the
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are dried for 24 to 48 hours in a drying oven. After that, the
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are stored in a furnace where they are first kept
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moderate
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temperature of 200 to 980 degrees and at
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temperature of 870 to 1300 degrees. After the
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are placed in
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the cooling
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chamber for 48-72 hours. After cooling in the sixth stage the
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will be packed for transport. In the
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bricks
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are sent for delivery

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