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It is believed by some that teaching physical education in school is a waste of time and energy, however, other group of people tend to think that sport in collegues is a crucial part of education process.

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It is believed by some that teaching physical education in school is a waste of time and energy,
however
, other
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 of people tend to think that
sport
 in
collegues
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colleagues
 is a crucial part of
education
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the education
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 process.
Nevertheless
, there is no absolute agreement
whether
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sport
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the sport
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 should have
place
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a place
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 in schools or it is
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a non
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non obligatory
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 thing. A commonly held belief is that amount of
recources
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resources
 acquired and used for studying PE could be contributed to
learn
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 other more vital studies. As evidence of
this
 they point to that math,
phycics
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physics
 and
rest
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 of technical subjects are more important than
bench
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the bench
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 of physical activities and these exercises could not provide
with
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those benefits as major or minor could. It could be explained by the fact that
sport
 can not be evaluated, so high schools and universities accept them to study
in
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 their walls because the
enrolle
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enrolled
enrollee
enrollment
 is
athlete
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an athlete
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, they choose them because of
his
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 hard and soft skills.
As a
result
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 humanity sees
sport
 lessons as a useless way of spending time that do not give any advantages for their future.
On the other hand
, some people claim that deprivation of enough
done
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exercises
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 may
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 about
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the degradation
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 of
mental
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 and physical health of students.
For
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 they may mention that
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the overbundance
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overbundance
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overabundance
 of stress that students receive from studying would
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 by physical exercises.
In addition
, by doing
sport
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sports
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 adolescents relax their
brain
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, nerves and other stuff. The explanation lies in the fact that during work-out our body
relases
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releases
 some kind of hormones called dopamine that makes us delighted and forgot all our issues,
stresses
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and stresses
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 for
specific
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 time.
Therefore
,
sport
 subject encourages and enhances mental well-being and it is mandatory. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account
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 would agree with the latter statement, pupils need some rest during
school
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the school
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 year and physical education can grant it to them.
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