You have lost something on a bus and called customer service to get help. You weren't happy with their response. Write a letter to the bus company manager. In your letter, you should: · describe the item you lost · explain why you weren't happy with the customer service · say what action you would like the company to take.

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Dear Sir I am writing

this

letter regarding a matter which concerns me significantly.Recently, I travelled on a bus registered with your company and ,

however

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,however

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I lost my shoulder

bag

.It is a brown leather

bag

with 2 vertical stripes on the front.

Lastly

,it is in pretty decent condition. I decided to take assistance from your customer service,

conversely

,they were derelict.Later they not only stopped responding to my calls but

also

were uncooperative.

Nevertheless

,they said it was my fault in the first place. I request you to look into

this

problem as that

bag

is a crucial asset for me.It has pivotal documents regarding my educational background.

Moreover

,kindly take imperative steps to improve your services so that

this

can be avoided in future.I look forward to hearing from you about my

bag

. Thank you in anticipation Your's Faithfully Ahmad Hassan Nadeem

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

136 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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