The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.

The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.
The graph informs about how much
money
paid on books in four European countries (
Germany
, France, Italy, and Austria) for ten years between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, there was a decent enhancement the amount of
money
spent in
Germany
, France, Italy, and Austria with
Germany
being the country that spent the most bill on books.
Firstly
, there was a fluctuation in how much
money
was paid on books in
Germany
which started at 80
million
in 1995 and ended above 90
million
by the end of 2005.
While
Italy got increased from 1995 to 1997 by about 5
million
and fluctuated eight years later to nearly above 60
million
.
On the other hand
, France began approximately from 50
million
and increased slightly towards the ten years to beyond 70
million
. Austria with the lowest
money
spent in 1995 rose gradually to 40
million
in 2001,
furthermore
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it rose significantly from 40 to above 70
million
in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, germany, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line chart
  • amount of money
  • paid on cars
  • China
  • Vietnam
  • Thailand
  • Indonesia
  • 1995
  • 2005
  • significant increase
  • highest amount
  • steady growth
  • lowest overall spending
  • started at
  • doubled
  • nearly
  • reached
  • exceeded
  • among
  • half a billion dollars
  • conclusion
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