Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that instead of

preventing climate change, we need to find a

way to live with it. To what extent do you

agree or disagree?
Nowadays
the
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apply
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climate
change
is a problem
with
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in
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many
nation
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nations
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but some people believe that we
dont
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don't
need
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find
the
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a
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method to resolve
this
problem .
i
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would agree that There are several advantages of we find
these way
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these ways
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to resolve
climate
change
.
Firstly
we should
inprove
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improve
and protect sources of green energy and we
is
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are
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also
plant a wide range of trees
this
make prevent soil erosion and helps these animals have
clean
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food source.
Secondly
. We can try to limit influences
to
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climate
change
such
as
reduce
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reducing
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motorbikes using gasoline and buying products which are good for
environment
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the environment
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.
This
will
them
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prevent
climate
change
. there are some disadvantages of we don’t should solve the
clmiate
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climate
change
.
Firstly
. When we don’t impact
on
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climate
change
this
make
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them have a bad life.
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, it will impact
on
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life on
earth
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Earth
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Climate
change
increases natural disasters, storms, floods, droughts, earthquakes,
tsunamis
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and tsunamis
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. Earthquakes and floods tend to increase and
the
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climate
change
can cause flooding or forest
fire
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fires
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that can demolish the habitat
wild
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of wild
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animals.
finally
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,
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climate
change
will cause
agricultural
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agriculture
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led
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to lead
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to soil erosion and The crops
are
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being
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heavily damaged
this
made
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makes
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farmers
famers
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farmers
unable to grow crops and
it
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causes starvation in conclusion, despite the described advantages of humans can prevent
climate
change
, I suppose that there are
also
a
bit
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few
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benefits when people find
method
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methods
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to resolve
this problems
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this problem
these problems
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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