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you have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: Give details of your stay What were the high & low points of the hotel What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
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 letter to give you feedback on my stay in your hotel. I stayed in your hotel for 2 days.The room number where I spend my nights was 40.It was booked under the name of Sukh where all utilities including morning meals were included. The things that I liked were free parking and clean
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 a quiet environment maintained by the staff.I loved the rules that no noise after 10 P.M. unlike other hotels,but the meal which we got in the morning was not fresh,that was a disappointing point of my stay.
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, the wifi internet speed was so low that when I was watching Youtube,it was buffering all the time. I suggest you work on
manu
Correct your spelling
many
 of the breakfast.As you are charging for
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 meal,you should not compromise on the quality of its taste.
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,you should install wifi speed boosters on every floor of the building as it is a basic need of today's world and everyone has their mobile phones;
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,it will impact your customers in the long term. Yours faithfully, Raman

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • I stayed at your hotel for three nights last week.
  • I visited the city on vacation with my family.
  • The best part of my stay was the helpful staff.
  • My room was clean, bright, and comfortable.
  • The hotel is in a very good location.
  • Breakfast was fresh and had many choices.
  • One problem was the loud noise at night.
  • The Wi-Fi was very slow and often stopped working.
  • The air conditioning did not work well.
  • The bathroom was not as clean as I expected.
  • I would like to make a small complaint.
  • I suggest that you check the rooms more carefully.
  • It would be better if the hotel improved room service.
  • I hope you can look into this matter.
  • I look forward to your reply.
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