The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.

The bar graph provided information about the rate of part-time employees in each country of the United Kingdom in the year 1980 and in 2010.

Overall

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, it can be seen that there are four countries. England and Wales have

rise

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a rise

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in percentage,

whereas

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Northern Ireland has a

downfall

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fall

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rate.

On the other hand

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, during the 1980's the worker's rate

had

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apply

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fluctuation.

The

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apply

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England in 1980 has 25% of labours for part-time work,

as well as

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, in 2010 it increased to 5% of

workers

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for a job.

The

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apply

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Northern Ireland in the first period has 19% and in the

,

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apply

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last

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it has 18% of

workers

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,

therefore

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in Northern Ireland there is not much difference in the employee's amount.

Secondly

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, Scotland

have

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has

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shown a rise in labour application for short-duration work.

However

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, it has 10% during the beginning and drastically rises to 25%

at the end

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of the era.

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, the

last

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country is Wales the percentage of part-time

workers

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in Wales is at

peak

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its peak

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.

In addition

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, the region has an upward trend,

along with

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it, it has 40% of

workers

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in the year 2010.