The charts below show the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates how much the provincial's smuggling consumption is and demonstrates the difference between 2015 and 2016. there are several categories, which are kerosene
products
, engineered property, gems and jewellery, agricultural products
, and goods. In this
report, we are going to discuss the chunk change of different products
during 2015 and 2016.
Firstly
, fuel showed the highest volumes of all of the furnishings, which is over 60 oodles during the terms. Besides
, engineered furniture also
provides over 50 lots and this
increase by 8.5 per cent from the next year. Nevertheless
, the third highest transport earning will be gems and jewellery, whereas
the products
earn about 40 lots in both 2015 and 2016. However
, this
type of brand decreases the most and it's the only brand that decreases the value of ships during the year, the falling amount of bonus is 5.18, which the bucolic might need to concern about why there are fall
gems and jewellery or need to build a strategy to raise the value of smuggling.
Wrong verb form
falling
Secondly
, agriculture and cotton won the lowest transport earning in the term. Both of the products
have over 20 lots shipped but it is much lower than crude oil and engineered equipment in the short term. The homey companies and government will need to take action to raising
awareness of Change the verb form
raise
this
kind of brand, even though there is a dramatic increase in proportion especially in cotton, which raises the volume of the amount by 15.24 per cent the highest interest change in all of the categories.
In summary, the agrarian has the best selling on fossil fuel and engineered amount but earns the smallest proportion on cotton and agriculture. In my perspective, the company and government can encourage foreign consumer
and domestic citizens to consume more of the commodity on the lower earnings equipment.Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
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