The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.
The pie charts depict information about the sources of energy
oil
, natural gas, coal, hydroelectric power
and nuclear power
in the USA between 1980 and 1990. The units are calibrated in percentage.
Overall
, oil
is in leading
position most of the people in Add an article
the leading
a leading
usa
have used it Correct your spelling
USA
while
hydroelectric power
is insignificant.
To begin
with ,in the year 1980, 42% of oil
is utilised by people which is highest
in the USA.
Correct article usage
the highest
Furthermore
, in 1990 ,8% of oil
had been decreased. Secondly
, in source
of energy natural gas had 26% which is Add an article
the source
a source
high
rate after Correct article usage
a high
oil
but 1% had been decreased in 1990.Remaining
three Correct article usage
The remaining
source
of energy coal had 22% by 1990 5% had Change to a plural noun
sources
been
increased. Nuclear Unnecessary verb
apply
power
were
least but Change the verb form
was
5%had
been raised in 1990. Correct your spelling
5% had
Moreover
, hydroelectric power
remains unchanged in both the years.Submitted by rd.prasanna569 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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