Tha chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan

Tha chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan
The given data shows the
population
of
Japan
as well as
the percentage of the elderly
population
there from 1950 and
also
gives
prediction
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till the year 2055. As is seen in the given diagram, the
population
of
Japan
started to decline after 2005 and after 2035 it will sharply decrease. The
population
over 65
years
will be more than 40% of the total
population
in the year 2055. As is shown in the bar graph,
Japan
’s
population
in 1950 was only 84
million
. The
population
kept on increasing without any exception and in 2005 it reached over 127
million
which was the highest
population
in
Japan
. After 2005 the
population
dropped and in 2015 it was just over 125
million
. After 20
years
the
population
will drop sharply and
finally
in 2055 the
population
of
Japan
would be only 89.9
million
which is almost the same as it was in 1950. The prediction clearly indicates that the
population
of
Japan
is surely to drop in the future. Again, the table data presents the numbers and percentages of the elderly
population
in
Japan
who are over 65
years
old. As is seen, the number of
such
older citizens in
Japan
was only 4.1
million
which was less than 5% of the total
population
.
This
percentage reached 20 in 2005 and it is predicted that in the future more than one-third of the Japanese
population
will be over 65
years
old.
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