The line graph gives information about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998. Summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.

The line graph gives information about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998.

Summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph describes the total crime arrested for
person
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persons
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under 18
percentage
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changes locally in Panama
city
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between 2010 and 2019.
Overall
,
it is clear that
while
burglary dropped a large statistic of
incidents
significantly, car theft and robbery remained almost the same throughout the given period. Looking at more detail, even though in 2010, burglary had the most total of
incidents
, which was around 3500, it sharply declined the number of
action
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by the year of 2015. Regarding
to
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car theft was the second figure of
incidents
, which was just less than 3000, and fluctuated slightly, but it ended up with almost the same percentage of
incidents
in 2019, So did robbery but, robbery had the least number of
incidents
in certain years.
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