The line graph gives information about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998. Summarise the information and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph describes the total crime arrested for
person
under 18Fix the agreement mistake
persons
percentage
changes locally in Panama Replace the word
per cent
city
between 2010 and 2019.Capitalize word
City
Overall
, it is clear that
while
burglary dropped a large statistic of incidents
significantly, car theft and robbery remained almost the same throughout the given period.
Looking at more detail, even though in 2010, burglary had the most total of incidents
, which was around 3500, it sharply declined the number of action
by the year of 2015.
Regarding Fix the agreement mistake
actions
to
car theft was the second figure of Remove the preposition
apply
incidents
, which was just less than 3000, and fluctuated slightly, but it ended up with almost the same percentage of incidents
in 2019, So did robbery but, robbery had the least number of incidents
in certain years.Submitted by mof.v914 on
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