You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the average number of UK

commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between

1970 and 2030.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the

information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the

main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The chart shows the average
number
of UK
passengers
for commute each day by
car
,
bus
or
train
between 1970 and 2030. At the beginning of the period , cars had the highest
number
of
commuters
among all the
veihicles
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vehicles
. The figure was less than 6
million
.
In contrast
,  the
number
of
commuters
by
bus
and
train
was 4
million
and 2
million
, respectively.
After
this
time, both
of
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car
and
train
 
passengers
 increased with a similar pattern, but the 
number
of
commuters
by
bus
continued decreasing at about the same rate.  Between 2000 and 2010, growth in the
number
of
commuters
remained constant in
car
and
train
During
this
time, these figures were 7
million
and 3
million
respectively.
However
, there was an interesting change after 2010. Growth in the
number
of
train
commuters
accelerated
while
bus
passengers
fell slightly.
As a result
,
the
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train
commuters
 were predicted to be more than
bus
passengers
 by 2
million
in 2030. On the other, the
number
of
commuters
by
car
was expected to reach a high of 9
million
.
Overall
, it is seen that  
car
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and
train
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trains
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 experienced 
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upward similar tendency between 1970 and 2030. Meanwhile,
bus
declined gradually over the period.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, car, bus, train, commuters, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • commuters
  • average
  • mode of transport
  • consistent
  • steady rise
  • significant increase
  • gradual decline
  • projection
  • surpassing
  • external factors
  • advancements
  • public transportation policies
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