The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows the average
number
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of UK
passengers
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for commute each day by
car
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,
bus
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or
train
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between 1970 and 2030. At the beginning of the period , cars had the highest
number
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of
commuters
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among all the
veihicles
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vehicles
. The figure was less than 6
million
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.
In contrast
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,  the
number
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of
commuters
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by
bus
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and
train
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was 4
million
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and 2
million
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, respectively.
After
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this
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time, both
of
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car
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and
train
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passengers
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 increased with a similar pattern, but the 
number
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of
commuters
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by
bus
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continued decreasing at about the same rate.  Between 2000 and 2010, growth in the
number
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of
commuters
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remained constant in
car
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and
train
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During
this
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time, these figures were 7
million
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and 3
million
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respectively.
However
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, there was an interesting change after 2010. Growth in the
number
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of
train
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commuters
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accelerated
while
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bus
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passengers
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fell slightly.
As a result
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,
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train
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commuters
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 were predicted to be more than
bus
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passengers
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 by 2
million
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in 2030. On the other, the
number
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of
commuters
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by
car
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was expected to reach a high of 9
million
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.
Overall
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, it is seen that  
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car
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cars
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and
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train
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trains
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 experienced 
the
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an
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upward similar tendency between 1970 and 2030. Meanwhile,
bus
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declined gradually over the period.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, car, bus, train, commuters, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • commuters
  • average
  • mode of transport
  • consistent
  • steady rise
  • significant increase
  • gradual decline
  • projection
  • surpassing
  • external factors
  • advancements
  • public transportation policies
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