You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart shows the average
number
of UK passengers
for commute each day by car
, bus
or train
between 1970 and 2030.
At the beginning of the period , cars had the highest number
of commuters
among all the veihicles
. The figure was less than 6 Correct your spelling
vehicles
million
. In contrast
, the number
of commuters
by bus
and train
was 4 million
and 2 million
, respectively. After
this
time, both of
Change preposition
apply
car
and train
passengers
increased with a similar pattern, but the number
of commuters
by bus
continued decreasing at about the same rate.
Between 2000 and 2010, growth in the number
of commuters
remained constant in car
and train
During this
time, these figures were 7 million
and 3 million
respectively. However
, there was an interesting change after 2010. Growth in the number
of train
commuters
accelerated while
bus
passengers
fell slightly. As a result
, the
Correct article usage
apply
train
commuters
were predicted to be more than bus
passengers
by 2 million
in 2030. On the other, the number
of commuters
by car
was expected to reach a high of 9 million
.
Overall
, it is seen that car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
train
experienced Fix the agreement mistake
trains
the
upward similar tendency between 1970 and 2030. Meanwhile, Correct article usage
an
bus
declined gradually over the period.Submitted by ku-hmi on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, car, bus, train, commuters, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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