The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The escape of the Brazilian boa constrictor earned Harry his longest-ever punishment. By the
time
he was allowed out of his cupboard again, the summer holidays had started and Dudley
had already broken his new video camera, crashed his remote control airplane
, and, first Change the spelling
aeroplane
time
out on his racing bike, knocked down old Mrs.
Figg as she crossed Privet Drive on her crutches. Harry was glad Change the punctuation
Mrs
school
was over, but there was no escaping Dudley
's gang, who visited the house every single day. Piers, Dennis, Malcolm, and Gordon were all big and stupid, but as Dudley
was the biggest and stupidest of the lot, he was the leader. The rest of them were all quite happy to join in
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apply
Dudley
's favorite
sport: Harry Hunting. Change the spelling
favourite
This
was why Harry spent as much time
as possible out of the house, wandering around and thinking about the end of the holidays, where he could see a tiny ray of hope. When September came he would be going off to secondary school
and, for the first time
in his life, he wouldn't be with Dudley
. Dudley
had been accepted at Uncle Vernon's old private school
, Smeltings. Piers Polkiss was going there too. Harry, on the other hand
, was going to Stonewall High, the local public school
. Dudley
thought this
was very funny. "They stuff people's heads down the toilet the first day at Stonewall," he told Harry. "Want to come upstairs and practice?" "No, thanks," said Harry. "The poor toilet's never had anything as horrible as your head down it -- it might be sick." Then
he ran,
before Remove the comma
apply
Dudley
could work out what he'd said. One day in July, Aunt Petunia took Dudley
to London to buy his Smeltings uniform, leaving Harry at Mrs. Figg's. Mrs.
Figg Change the punctuation
Mrs
wasn 't
as bad as usual. It turned out she'd broken her leg tripping over one of her cats,Correct your spelling
wasn't
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