The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the number of international students studying at a UK university between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The escape of the Brazilian boa constrictor earned Harry his longest-ever punishment. By the

time

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he was allowed out of his cupboard again, the summer holidays had started and

Dudley

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had already broken his new video camera, crashed his remote control

airplane

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, and, first

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out on his racing bike, knocked down old

Mrs.

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Figg as she crossed Privet Drive on her crutches. Harry was glad

school

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was over, but there was no escaping

Dudley

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's gang, who visited the house every single day. Piers, Dennis, Malcolm, and Gordon were all big and stupid, but as

Dudley

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was the biggest and stupidest of the lot, he was the leader. The rest of them were all quite happy to join

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Dudley

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favorite

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sport: Harry Hunting.

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was why Harry spent as much

time

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as possible out of the house, wandering around and thinking about the end of the holidays, where he could see a tiny ray of hope. When September came he would be going off to secondary

school

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and, for the first

time

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in his life, he wouldn't be with

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Dudley

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had been accepted at Uncle Vernon's old private

school

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, Smeltings. Piers Polkiss was going there too. Harry,

on the other hand

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, was going to Stonewall High, the local public

school

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Dudley

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thought

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was very funny. "They stuff people's heads down the toilet the first day at Stonewall," he told Harry. "Want to come upstairs and practice?" "No, thanks," said Harry. "The poor toilet's never had anything as horrible as your head down it -- it might be sick."

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he ran

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before

Dudley

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could work out what he'd said. One day in July, Aunt Petunia took

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to London to buy his Smeltings uniform, leaving Harry at Mrs. Figg's.

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wasn 't

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as bad as usual. It turned out she'd broken her leg tripping over one of her cats,

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, dudley, school with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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3
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

313 words

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