The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectronic povert station summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectronic povert station summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The diagram demonstrates the process of producing
electricity
in a hydroelectric power station. it is seen that
this
process has generally five stages and is a simple process that requires a range of equipment and machinery.
The first step is
that
water
goes to the high-level reservoir and is stored there.
this
water
will be controlled by a dam which is open during the
day
and closed at night. during the
day
when Dam opens
water
flows to turbines and generators operate and produce
electricity
.
subsequently
,
electricity
is shared by powers line into National Grid,
whereas
in the nighttime,
water
is pumped up from the low-level Reservoir to the high-level reservoir through reservable turbines.
To sum up
, a hydroelectric power station can generate
electricity
at different times
day
time it uses the National
Water
energy from the river and at night it transfers the
water
to create and store the energy for the next
day
.
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