The line graph presents three common criminal activities in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.
The charts reveal the three most occured criminal activities in England and Wales for 35 years from 1970.
Overall
, the three most occurred criminals (car theft, house burgling, and street robbery) had an increase compared between 1970 and 2005.
First,
car theft which has the most common crime with 0.4 million
occurred in 1970 and increased steadily to 1 million
by the year 1990. By 1995, it hit a peak of 1.6 million
and declined suddenly to 1 million
in 2005.
Moreover
, house burglary with the second most common crime started at 0.2 million
in 1970. 1980 witnessed a gradual rose to 0.6 million
. For the next 25 years, which began in 1980 began to fluctuate and ended just below 0.6 million
in 2005.
Lastly
, street robbery has a stable trend between 1970 and 1990 at the pace of 0.1 million
. 1995 started to rocket up to 0.2 million
by the end of the year.Submitted by galihw on
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