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The graph illustrates the rates of recycling in the households of three different countries: The UK, France and Germany from 2005-2015.

The graph illustrates the rates of recycling in the households of three different countries: The UK, France and Germany from 2005-2015.
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The line graph below shows the levels of reprocessing in domestic
waste
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 in three countries. The
UK
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, France, and Germany.
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, throughout the
period
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, the rate of reproduction in households in the
UK
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 and Germany witnessed an
increase
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,
while
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 it saw a decrease in France. The
UK
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 was dominant
at the end
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 of the
period
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. At the beginning of the
period
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, Germany recycled 20% of domestic
waste
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. The future increased sharply during the
period
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 and stayed at approximately over 50%, which is a rise of 30 %. A considerable
increase
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 in the recycling rate of domestic
waste
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 was recorded in the
UK
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 after 2009, though it started at about 35%. After 2009 the
UK
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 took over dominance from others and saw a sharp
increase
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 in recovering households, which went from 40% to 60% 'in 6
years'
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 time, which is an
increase
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 of 20%.
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most domestic
waste
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 was recycled in France, it started to decrease gradually from the beginning of the
period
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 and went on to 2013, which was 30%, a decrease of 20%, and saw a little
increase
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 to 40% until the end.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, uk, period, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
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