The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates how different of time working adults in a specific nation spend on various
activities
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in the years 1958 and 2008.
overall
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, at the beginning of the period, travel to work was the least significant part of the adult's
activities
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,
while
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working was the largest segment. In comparison,
at the end
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of the period still become the largest segment and the lowest contribution was made up by going out ( with friends/family). the working segment accounted for 33% of adult's
activities
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in 1958 and experienced a more increase and it was 42% in 2008. The piece of relaxing at home was 8% in 1958 and had a slight growth of 5% in 2008. At the beginning of the period, other interests or playing sports made up 6% of adults'
activities
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respectively, and
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figure rose to 8% in 2008. Sleeping, which was one of the highest percentages in 1958, fell to 25% in 2008. In 1958 adults' activity output from going out with family was at 19%, and it decreased by 11% after 50 years.
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