The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in england and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main deatures, and mae comparison where relevant.

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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of

households

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owning

accommodation

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and rented

house

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houses

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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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, it can be clearly seen that the trend

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for

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both

accomodations

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accommodations

accommodation

was in opposite direction. Owned

accommodation

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had a considerable increase trend,

while

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rented

home

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experienced

decline

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a decline

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. Looking at the information in more detail, in the first year around 24% of

households

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had

owning

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owned

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home

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a home

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and

this

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percentage rose to 50% in 1971.

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This

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this

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year, the portion was the same as people rented

home

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. The percentage of

households

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had

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that had

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their

accommodation

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continue

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continued

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to increase and reached a peak at just under 70% in 2001, before declining to approximately 65%

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the end of the period. As

regard

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regards

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apply

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households

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in rented

accommodation

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, it started at about 76%

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households

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of households

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rented

home

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and

this

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figure fell significantly to just over 30% in 2001.

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, the proportion of rented

house

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houses

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went up slightly in the

last

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year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, accommodation, home with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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