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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your firend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this sport together

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Dear Susan. I hope you are doing well. It's been a long time since we have not met. Despite the fact that I hope you will find
this
 letter helpful since I am going to suggest a new sport, how about if I suggest badminton which is so intensive and effective for
overall
 body health. Because I reckon that you were struggling to reduce body fat and trim muscles as well. The game which I recommend to you does not require much more knowledge and equipment. The good thing is that you need only two players who can be your family members or any friends and a pair of badminton with a shuttle cock but you can buy an extra shuttle cock if you wish to because usually, it's getting damaged easily which might interrupt your play. If you find any difficulties
while
 playing
this
 sport you can reach out to me on phone calls as well.
However
, I assure you that we will play
this
 game together very soon since I am going to take 10 days of summer vacation from next week on Monday. I cannot wait to see you again. Best Regards Shiba
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